diff --git a/story_design/ink/dr_chen_ongoing_conversations.ink b/story_design/ink/dr_chen_ongoing_conversations.ink index 1ee0b13..8e5d773 100644 --- a/story_design/ink/dr_chen_ongoing_conversations.ink +++ b/story_design/ink/dr_chen_ongoing_conversations.ink @@ -1771,12 +1771,13 @@ Dr. Chen: Peaceful. After years of fighting cyber threats. Just... peace. === conversation_end_phase3 === -{npc_chen_rapport >= 85: - Dr. Chen: Always energizing talking with you, {player_name}. Let's do this again soon! -- npc_chen_rapport >= 75: - Dr. Chen: Great conversation. Stay safe out there, okay? -- else: - Dr. Chen: Take care. Let me know if you need anything. +{ + - npc_chen_rapport >= 85: + Dr. Chen: Always energizing talking with you, {player_name}. Let's do this again soon! + - npc_chen_rapport >= 75: + Dr. Chen: Great conversation. Stay safe out there, okay? + - else: + Dr. Chen: Take care. Let me know if you need anything. } #exit_conversation @@ -1784,12 +1785,13 @@ Dr. Chen: Peaceful. After years of fighting cyber threats. Just... peace. === conversation_end_phase4 === -{npc_chen_rapport >= 95: - Dr. Chen: *warm smile* Thanks for being such an incredible partner. And friend. Seriously. -- npc_chen_rapport >= 85: - Dr. Chen: Until next time, partner. Keep making me proud out there. -- else: - Dr. Chen: Good talking. Be safe. +{ + - npc_chen_rapport >= 95: + Dr. Chen: *warm smile* Thanks for being such an incredible partner. And friend. Seriously. + - npc_chen_rapport >= 85: + Dr. Chen: Until next time, partner. Keep making me proud out there. + - else: + Dr. Chen: Good talking. Be safe. } #exit_conversation @@ -1798,12 +1800,13 @@ Dr. Chen: Peaceful. After years of fighting cyber threats. Just... peace. === conversation_end_phase1 === -{npc_chen_rapport >= 65: - Dr. Chen: Great talking! Let me know if you need anything. Seriously, anytime. -- npc_chen_rapport >= 50: - Dr. Chen: Anytime you need tech support, you know where to find me. -- else: - Dr. Chen: Alright. Good luck out there. +{ + - npc_chen_rapport >= 65: + Dr. Chen: Great talking! Let me know if you need anything. Seriously, anytime. + - npc_chen_rapport >= 50: + Dr. Chen: Anytime you need tech support, you know where to find me. + - else: + Dr. Chen: Alright. Good luck out there. } #exit_conversation @@ -1811,12 +1814,13 @@ Dr. Chen: Peaceful. After years of fighting cyber threats. Just... peace. === conversation_end_phase2 === -{npc_chen_rapport >= 75: - Dr. Chen: Always a pleasure, {player_name}. Let's collaborate again soon! -- npc_chen_rapport >= 60: - Dr. Chen: Thanks for the chat. Stay safe out there. -- else: - Dr. Chen: Talk later. Good luck. +{ + - npc_chen_rapport >= 75: + Dr. Chen: Always a pleasure, {player_name}. Let's collaborate again soon! + - npc_chen_rapport >= 60: + Dr. Chen: Thanks for the chat. Stay safe out there. + - else: + Dr. Chen: Talk later. Good luck. } #exit_conversation diff --git a/story_design/ink/haxolottle_ongoing_conversations.ink b/story_design/ink/haxolottle_ongoing_conversations.ink index 4779dfd..dff1ec1 100644 --- a/story_design/ink/haxolottle_ongoing_conversations.ink +++ b/story_design/ink/haxolottle_ongoing_conversations.ink @@ -949,14 +949,16 @@ Haxolottle: But it's worth checking in with yourself. "Is this useful vigilance === conversation_end === -{npc_haxolottle_conversations_had >= 5 and npc_haxolottle_friendship_level >= 40: - Haxolottle: I really appreciate these talks, Agent {player_name}. Makes the work feel less isolating. -- else: - Haxolottle: Alright. Back to the mission. Talk later. +{ + - npc_haxolottle_conversations_had >= 5 and npc_haxolottle_friendship_level >= 40: + Haxolottle: I really appreciate these talks, Agent {player_name}. Makes the work feel less isolating. + - else: + Haxolottle: Alright. Back to the mission. Talk later. } -{npc_haxolottle_friendship_level >= 60: - Haxolottle: And hey... you're becoming a real friend. Within the constraints of Protocol 47-Alpha, but a friend nonetheless. +{ + - npc_haxolottle_friendship_level >= 60: + Haxolottle: And hey... you're becoming a real friend. Within the constraints of Protocol 47-Alpha, but a friend nonetheless. } #exit_conversation diff --git a/story_design/ink/netherton_ongoing_conversations.ink b/story_design/ink/netherton_ongoing_conversations.ink index 9855074..b9caa6a 100644 --- a/story_design/ink/netherton_ongoing_conversations.ink +++ b/story_design/ink/netherton_ongoing_conversations.ink @@ -362,12 +362,13 @@ Netherton: I expect to see continued progress. Maintain this trajectory. === expectations_current_assessment === ~ npc_netherton_respect += 12 -{npc_netherton_respect >= 70: - Netherton: You are exceeding expectations for your experience level. Continue this performance. -- npc_netherton_respect >= 55: - Netherton: You are meeting standards. There is room for improvement, but your trajectory is positive. -- else: - Netherton: You are adequate. Adequate is insufficient for SAFETYNET's needs. Improvement is required. +{ + - npc_netherton_respect >= 70: + Netherton: You are exceeding expectations for your experience level. Continue this performance. + - npc_netherton_respect >= 55: + Netherton: You are meeting standards. There is room for improvement, but your trajectory is positive. + - else: + Netherton: You are adequate. Adequate is insufficient for SAFETYNET's needs. Improvement is required. } Netherton: Specific areas for development will be addressed in formal performance reviews. But overall... *brief pause* ...you show promise. @@ -513,36 +514,37 @@ Netherton: Your development has been... *consults memory* ...notably consistent. === development_specific_feedback === ~ npc_netherton_respect += 22 -{npc_netherton_respect >= 75: - Netherton: Your technical skills are excellent. Your judgment under pressure has improved significantly. Field craft is developing appropriately. +{ + - npc_netherton_respect >= 75: + Netherton: Your technical skills are excellent. Your judgment under pressure has improved significantly. Field craft is developing appropriately. - Netherton: Focus on strategic thinking. You excel at tactical execution. Now develop the capacity to see three moves ahead. Anticipate consequences beyond immediate objectives. + Netherton: Focus on strategic thinking. You excel at tactical execution. Now develop the capacity to see three moves ahead. Anticipate consequences beyond immediate objectives. - Netherton: Leadership potential is evident. Begin considering command responsibilities. How you would manage teams. How you would make resource allocation decisions. + Netherton: Leadership potential is evident. Begin considering command responsibilities. How you would manage teams. How you would make resource allocation decisions. - *rare warmth* + *rare warmth* - Netherton: You're on track to become one of SAFETYNET's premier agents. Maintain this trajectory. + Netherton: You're on track to become one of SAFETYNET's premier agents. Maintain this trajectory. - ~ npc_netherton_respect += 25 - ~ professional_reputation += 3 -- npc_netherton_respect >= 60: - Netherton: Technical competence is solid. Decision-making is sound. Operational performance meets standards. + ~ npc_netherton_respect += 25 + ~ professional_reputation += 3 + - npc_netherton_respect >= 60: + Netherton: Technical competence is solid. Decision-making is sound. Operational performance meets standards. - Netherton: Develop deeper strategic awareness. Understand the broader context of operations. How your missions connect to organizational objectives. + Netherton: Develop deeper strategic awareness. Understand the broader context of operations. How your missions connect to organizational objectives. - Netherton: Increase your initiative. Don't wait for instructions when the correct action is clear. Trust your judgment more. + Netherton: Increase your initiative. Don't wait for instructions when the correct action is clear. Trust your judgment more. - ~ npc_netherton_respect += 15 - ~ professional_reputation += 1 -- else: - Netherton: You meet minimum standards. That is insufficient for advancement. + ~ npc_netherton_respect += 15 + ~ professional_reputation += 1 + - else: + Netherton: You meet minimum standards. That is insufficient for advancement. - Netherton: Improve technical precision. Develop better situational awareness. Demonstrate more consistent judgment. + Netherton: Improve technical precision. Develop better situational awareness. Demonstrate more consistent judgment. - Netherton: Review handbook sections 8 through 12. Study after-action reports from successful operations. Learn from excellence. + Netherton: Review handbook sections 8 through 12. Study after-action reports from successful operations. Learn from excellence. - ~ npc_netherton_respect += 8 + ~ npc_netherton_respect += 8 } -> phase_2_hub @@ -1420,46 +1422,47 @@ Netherton: You're becoming the kind of agent I hoped to develop. The kind SAFETY Netherton: My honest assessment. *sets aside work, gives full attention* -{npc_netherton_respect >= 95: - Netherton: You are among the finest agents I've commanded in twenty-three years with SAFETYNET. +{ + - npc_netherton_respect >= 95: + Netherton: You are among the finest agents I've commanded in twenty-three years with SAFETYNET. - Netherton: Your technical skills are exceptional. Your judgment is sound. Your ethics are intact despite pressures that corrupt many agents. + Netherton: Your technical skills are exceptional. Your judgment is sound. Your ethics are intact despite pressures that corrupt many agents. - Netherton: You demonstrate leadership qualities that suggest you'll eventually command your own division. When that time comes, I'll recommend you without reservation. + Netherton: You demonstrate leadership qualities that suggest you'll eventually command your own division. When that time comes, I'll recommend you without reservation. - *rare genuine warmth* + *rare genuine warmth* - Netherton: More than that—you've reminded me why this work matters. Why developing agents is worthwhile. You represent what SAFETYNET should be. + Netherton: More than that—you've reminded me why this work matters. Why developing agents is worthwhile. You represent what SAFETYNET should be. - Netherton: I'm honored to have commanded you. Genuinely. + Netherton: I'm honored to have commanded you. Genuinely. - ~ npc_netherton_respect += 60 - ~ professional_reputation += 5 - ~ npc_netherton_received_commendation = true + ~ npc_netherton_respect += 60 + ~ professional_reputation += 5 + ~ npc_netherton_received_commendation = true -- npc_netherton_respect >= 85: - Netherton: You are an excellent agent. Top tier performance across all metrics. + - npc_netherton_respect >= 85: + Netherton: You are an excellent agent. Top tier performance across all metrics. - Netherton: Your capabilities continue to develop. Your judgment improves with each operation. You're on track for significant advancement. + Netherton: Your capabilities continue to develop. Your judgment improves with each operation. You're on track for significant advancement. - Netherton: I have no substantial criticisms. Minor areas for growth, but overall—you exceed expectations consistently. + Netherton: I have no substantial criticisms. Minor areas for growth, but overall—you exceed expectations consistently. - *approving* + *approving* - Netherton: Continue this trajectory and you'll have a distinguished career. I'm confident in that assessment. + Netherton: Continue this trajectory and you'll have a distinguished career. I'm confident in that assessment. - ~ npc_netherton_respect += 45 - ~ professional_reputation += 4 - ~ npc_netherton_received_commendation = true + ~ npc_netherton_respect += 45 + ~ professional_reputation += 4 + ~ npc_netherton_received_commendation = true -- else: - Netherton: You are a solid, reliable agent. You meet standards and occasionally exceed them. + - else: + Netherton: You are a solid, reliable agent. You meet standards and occasionally exceed them. - Netherton: There's room for growth. Areas to develop. But your foundation is strong. + Netherton: There's room for growth. Areas to develop. But your foundation is strong. - Netherton: I'm satisfied with your performance and optimistic about your continued development. + Netherton: I'm satisfied with your performance and optimistic about your continued development. - ~ npc_netherton_respect += 30 + ~ npc_netherton_respect += 30 ~ professional_reputation += 2 } @@ -1587,12 +1590,13 @@ Netherton: The fact that you understand that—that protocols are tools, not rep === conversation_end_phase1 === -{npc_netherton_respect >= 70: - Netherton: Acceptable performance continues, Agent {player_name}. Dismissed. -- npc_netherton_respect >= 55: - Netherton: Carry on, Agent. -- else: - Netherton: Dismissed. +{ + - npc_netherton_respect >= 70: + Netherton: Acceptable performance continues, Agent {player_name}. Dismissed. + - npc_netherton_respect >= 55: + Netherton: Carry on, Agent. + - else: + Netherton: Dismissed. } #exit_conversation @@ -1600,12 +1604,13 @@ Netherton: The fact that you understand that—that protocols are tools, not rep === conversation_end_phase2 === -{npc_netherton_respect >= 75: - Netherton: You're developing well, Agent. Continue this trajectory. -- npc_netherton_respect >= 60: - Netherton: Satisfactory. Dismissed. -- else: - Netherton: That will be all. +{ + - npc_netherton_respect >= 75: + Netherton: You're developing well, Agent. Continue this trajectory. + - npc_netherton_respect >= 60: + Netherton: Satisfactory. Dismissed. + - else: + Netherton: That will be all. } #exit_conversation @@ -1613,12 +1618,13 @@ Netherton: The fact that you understand that—that protocols are tools, not rep === conversation_end_phase3 === -{npc_netherton_respect >= 85: - Netherton: Agent {player_name}. *rare warmth* Your service is valued. Genuinely. -- npc_netherton_respect >= 75: - Netherton: Excellent work continues. Carry on, Agent. -- else: - Netherton: Dismissed, Agent. +{ + - npc_netherton_respect >= 85: + Netherton: Agent {player_name}. *rare warmth* Your service is valued. Genuinely. + - npc_netherton_respect >= 75: + Netherton: Excellent work continues. Carry on, Agent. + - else: + Netherton: Dismissed, Agent. } #exit_conversation @@ -1626,12 +1632,13 @@ Netherton: The fact that you understand that—that protocols are tools, not rep === conversation_end_phase4 === -{npc_netherton_respect >= 95: - Netherton: {player_name}. *uses first name* It's been an honor working with you. Until next time. -- npc_netherton_respect >= 85: - Netherton: Thank you for your time, Agent. And for your service. -- else: - Netherton: That will be all. +{ + - npc_netherton_respect >= 95: + Netherton: {player_name}. *uses first name* It's been an honor working with you. Until next time. + - npc_netherton_respect >= 85: + Netherton: Thank you for your time, Agent. And for your service. + - else: + Netherton: That will be all. } #exit_conversation